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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Fantastic

Very sexy. I should know more girls like you.

If you want to tease your readers the way you tease your men, it might be worthwhile to add more about the early part of the evening. I'd love to hear about the flirty build-up, personally.

Keep writing, you're doing fine.

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