All Comments on 'Was It Ravishment or Great Sex'

You were great in everything as you professed but you weren't really great in your punctuation like 'commas'. What happen to them?

And the story was very lukewarm. It was more talking about your conquest.

The story was poorly written and there was hardly any excitement at all. You have to work hard at writting stories.

Well, not too bad. Keep working at it and you will get better as you go along. Pretty good story.

you can't have your character be a well educated person and have all of the grammar and spelling errors that you do. if you would have had someone edit it first it would have been better.....

it started of well enuff, but petered out prtetty quickly. whatz the big deal should have been the name of the story, i guess. Also, the grammar,punctuation, and spelling (or the lack thereof) are a total turnoff.

Yeah. That takes a real man. Ugly story of rape and abuse. He belongs in prison for life.

No stars