All Comments on 'Watching Mrs Jones'

I liked some of your story. However, you need an editor to polish it up. Who's Mark? WTF is trust passing? Lots of mistakes like that.

...because you couldn't spell the letter "A" even if it was right in front of you. Trust passing? Give me a break. The term is is "...trespassing..." & you still probably wouldn't get it right. Get an Editor who's a mind reader. That might help though I doubt it.