All Comments on 'Watching Mum Ch. 03'

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BUICK GS about 19 years ago

TOO SHORT!!!!!!!!!

OK YOU HAVE A GOOD PLOT GOING BUT CHAPTER 3 WAS TOO SHORT! SO WHEN YOU WRITE CHAPTER 4 REMEMBER THIS, AS NO ONE NEEDS A CLIFFHANGER AT THIS POINT. JUST WRITE THE STORY, AND SEE WHERE IT LEADS. IF YOU CHAPTERS ARE SHORT PEOPLE MAY WAIT UNTIL YOU HAVE MORE THAN ONE CHAPTER TO READ.

CACTUS462 about 19 years ago

Dammmmmmmmmm

thxs for the 1st 3 chapters they were soooo hot cant wait for the rest hopefully soon

flimbim over 18 years ago

getting better

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