Try the free LITEROTICA WEBCAMS!

All Comments on 'Watching the Spanish Sun'

by Pitbullricky

Sort by:
Newest FirstOldest First
  • 3 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
No periods?

This is an entertaining story but, PLEASE use an editor. With such poor puctuation and spelling errors, you're losing points!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Sorry, but it has to be said

Get an editor. This story is full of basic grammatical errors and has the worst punctuation I've seen for a long time, to the point where parts of it are virtually unreadable. A shame, because there's some good stuff in there waiting to come out.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Poor form

Learn to spell, and learn to use grammar!

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Login
Post as:
Anonymous
Login