All Comments on 'Weekend of Surprises Ch. 01'

You really caught the feeling from all the perspectives. Love it and waiting for the next chapter. Waiting for the girls to get some cock.

It was great and very well written.

For my taste I would have preferred if both couples were new to swinging. I love the emotional issues associated with that so once you let the reader know the the couple had done some swinging it took that away.

I loved the buildup and time you took developing the story.

keep writing

jackie

More, more, excellent writing so well paced, made the whole story very believeable.

Not that I really care. Nice start! 5 stars.

Thanks to all who noted the mistaken inclusion of the name "Daisy" in the first page of this story. Unfortunately, I can't go back and edit the story once posted. But I appreciate your close read.

Bob A.

heading off to read the next installment...

That I've melted.

Your writing seduces the mind and pulls one into the story so effectively, I am not certain if I can last for the next two rounds.

Appreciate your kind words

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