by Bob_Aganoush
I would have liked to have seen the fun continue. Look forward to future contributions.
I wanted to give this 5 but I can't because it needs a little more to happen. There is a whole level of interaction unexplored between Andy and Bob, plus Sarah and Andy. You write really well but like a Chinese meal, I wanted more not long after...:) I feel as if i am in the midst of an erotic minefield and need you to guide me through to sexual heaven before I will be safe..lol
i loved the way you write, but the dominance over andy is missing and so is the deeper submission of carol, much more
The author did a poor job on this story. In fact it seems the author has some gay issues mixed with some cuckold issues that were transported to this bad story.
This story lacks of creativity, nonsense, shallow, low context, poor written and it is not even hot nor sexy story.
This story is not enjoyable and it is such waste of time reading all the way through.