by Big_Kahuna_69
thank you for this mesmerizingly beautiful piece of imagination
Thanks for another great story. I enjoy that you can take an image and wrap a story (and a sexy story at that) around it.
greetings from across the street from that office in Redmond, Wa.
Wonderful and extremely fluid piece. Love it
This is one of the best stories I've read in a long while. I can't wait to see what else you've got in store. Please keep up the good work.
(^_^)
Blessed Be
I really enjoyed it! I would love to read more with this same theme. Can we expect a continuation of the story? Or maybe a sequel with a new addition to the tank?
All i can say is if u can write stories like this then you need to be writing books the plot was wonderful the story was really enjoyable especially the ending I loved it i recommend everyone read this
I didn't like the picture that inspired you. But I like what it inspired. I like it very much.
Great work!
Wow. Well done. You could've written a brainless porn story like so many others I'd seen before, but instead you took a clever idea, wrapped an elegant story around it, gave it plot and flow and even a happy ending.
Well freaking done. :)
That was really great. I don't often write comments, but your story demands one. So unusual that I really enjoyed it. Less sex and more fun somehow than the others on this site. Don't tell anyone that I said so, as they might think I'm not here for the porn, but that was a superb pairing.