by Big_Kahuna_69
That was really great. I don't often write comments, but your story demands one. So unusual that I really enjoyed it. Less sex and more fun somehow than the others on this site. Don't tell anyone that I said so, as they might think I'm not here for the porn, but that was a superb pairing.
Wow. Well done. You could've written a brainless porn story like so many others I'd seen before, but instead you took a clever idea, wrapped an elegant story around it, gave it plot and flow and even a happy ending.
Well freaking done. :)
I didn't like the picture that inspired you. But I like what it inspired. I like it very much.
Great work!
All i can say is if u can write stories like this then you need to be writing books the plot was wonderful the story was really enjoyable especially the ending I loved it i recommend everyone read this
I really enjoyed it! I would love to read more with this same theme. Can we expect a continuation of the story? Or maybe a sequel with a new addition to the tank?
This is one of the best stories I've read in a long while. I can't wait to see what else you've got in store. Please keep up the good work.
(^_^)
Blessed Be
greetings from across the street from that office in Redmond, Wa.
Wonderful and extremely fluid piece. Love it
Thanks for another great story. I enjoy that you can take an image and wrap a story (and a sexy story at that) around it.
thank you for this mesmerizingly beautiful piece of imagination