All Comments on 'We'll Show You Ours, If...'

I like the detail, and how you build anticipation, leaving us wanting to know what happens next.

Excellent stuff. I also want more!

Would love to read more of this 4some - especially with both women trying to fit 2 cocks into each pussy.

Great story, very well crafted, and very, very erotic. Additionally, very plausible.<BR><BR>

Thanks!<BR>

-IM-

I enjoyed your story tremendously. But for some reason, it was being narrated by Craig Frugison in my head. Not a complaint... just asking!

I love this story. Wonderfully erotic!,

Very hot.

Well written and very descriptive.

Now I'm off to read more!

Shared eroticism among friends is so good. Thanks for the story...looking forward to the next chapter.

ryeandgingerayle2@yahoo.ca

Time to get the furniture and carpets cleaned.

I have really enjoyed this story. Great detail. Bring on two cocks in one hole.