All Comments on 'Wendy and Andrew'

I hope there are more chapters ahead!!! Well written and VERY exciting story!!!

Very well written. More sex? Well ya of course! Please do continue, this is a long held 'dream' my Wife & I both have.

A damn hot story, nice how Henry

gets Wendy to polish his knob with

Andrew watching, maybe next ch.

could be Mrs. Rose playing with

Andrew's prick with her bra or purse.

I'd give the story a 10 if possible.

2 thumbs up.

I love it, Wendy is getting some of her

fantasies with her kind neighbour Ann or

Anna Rose, whose husband loves her bum

and Andrew is getting good business advice

in exchange for Wendy polishing Henry's knob,

all so nicely arranged by Mrs. Rose.

One of the most exciting fantasies I have read on Literotica.

I had to stop 3 times for obvious reasons and I have started to read our other stories and loved them.

You spoil it a little by not continuing with your themes.

Well done MaryR

Mr Neighbour

I think this is your best story yet Mary. I can't wait to see how Wendy and Andrew entertain the Roses. Thinking about the special WI meetings with short uniforms has me becoming a big boy again already XXX

This time you out done yourself Mary

Very well written and highly erotic.

Cant wait to read parts 2 , 3 and 4

Ron

DaDoRonRon57@gMail.com

Another well put together story by Mary. I can't wait to see where it goes with the WI meetings.

Couldn't stand it. Quit a little way into page 2.

Great job. You always come throu and this was a great yard that had me wondering what was next.

The development on this is so erotic, the way it unfolds. I had to put myself in the place of Wendy though, not her soon-to-be-girly husband--especially when she was on her knees performing what hopefully is her new 'duty' for Mr. Rose. Please continue this, Mary. I so love your style, your writing!

Well done, Mary.

You have really brought Andrew & Wendy to life, and the Roses look like they will be very well 'entertained' indeed!

I look forward to reading the next part(s).

Wendy & Andrew has many elements of your previous stories, but I agree with the other commenters. This is your best so far - you did a great job developing the personalities of the characters. By the time we get to the sexy parts, it seems inevitable what must happen. Very well written overall.

This was a well written story, The slow steady build up also builds excitement leaving the reader wondering what happens next

I think Wendy is lovely, a mature women with big pussy who delights in teasing her husband and giving her soiled panties away for hime to play with.

A wonderful read, more please.

Erotic without being crude, I like crude too, but this is ideal reading for a nice slow, teasing build up. Your characters seem almost too normal to be naughty so when they get to the action it's all the more exciting. Lovely. Love the dialogue in the build up and even during the blow job. You've got a very unique style, Mary, keep it up... lol... I'm sure you do for many.....!

I love your story about Wendy, she is very needy and so is Andy. I sometimes cum into my wife's knickers and tights when I am in the mood, so this story has a special appeal. Like Wendy my wife has a big bottom and she doesn't shave. I think she suspects me as she occasionally seems to provoke me by saying that she hasn't changed her underwear today or that she is feeling sweaty. More stories like this please!

This is a fantastic story . We all need the next chapter...

Great story! It's been years since my penis has been this hard. It dribbled all through page 2 and I actually came when I read "tell her to eat my spunk". Thank you.

Thank you for such a well written and very erotic story, I think the characters are well developed and believable and I am so looking forward to reading about Wendy's experiences with the older ladies in her short uniform; I can imagine she's in for a very exciting time!

Great story, I loved it and hope another chapter will soon be posted.

I have followed Mary's writing career with interest. This latest story is a worthy addition to her growing collection.

Wonderful story.I did hope that Andrew would have experienced Mrs Roses dominant force but the informal meeting right at the end-I wish that instructions were given about dress code for the young couple needing that the meeting be delayed slightly.

Perfect control of the story line MaryR. The many possibilities of the story line flashed by at dizzy speed

Love your stories, Mary! And your subtle ways of pointing out various 'inadequacies".

Your tales move me below the belt, where it counts!

Thanks! William in Canada

Best erotic story that I have ever read.

I really enjoyed this, a good thumping read for sure.

Of course I still have no real idea why would want a

guy so, well lacking in that order of things down there

and I had to wonder, sheeeesh if he gets breasts, what

is environment at work going to be like? Yup, there is

an awful lot going on here, almost seems like a twisted

business deal helping out Andrew and getting a good

look at his wife's bum, but they are all happy and horny,

so what the dickens is wrong with that?

Wonderful! I would love to find out how the relationships progress. Thanks for writing!

Just found this story and loved it. I would think there are many married couples that would benefit from reading this and understanding that they are not alone in having a similar relationship. The important thing is to be completely open and explore all possibilities for maximum arousal

It is such a shame that you have stopped posting, I love all your stories in your many guises, especially the ones like this one.

thanks Margaret