by candytales
You are one sick fucker writing this shit
Your first sentence is a spectacular run on mish-mash. Really, grammar and punctuation are important if you want people to read your work. Judging by your bio you may have something interesting to say, but you will not have many readers until you get more literate. Good luck.
I disagree with the comments made earlier. I think this is a great story, with some hot sex, and I look forward to reading more. Don't let negative vibes from some illiterate ass-holes put you off.
Not being a fan of anal sex, I was wondrering how difficult or troublesome it would've be to at à certain point leave to the reader à choise of reading about anal sex. I know it would requiere the autor to alter an other ending but it with considering no? Sorry for my english, being and raised in french.
J-C P from Qc. In Canada