All Comments on 'What She Needs Ch. 12'

I've gotta admit, I'm kinda amused by the interactions between Laura's dad and David. It's always weird meeting the boyfriend, but most especially when both people are nearly the same age, I bet. Jason probably wants to wring this rich guy's neck right about now. So I enjoyed the chapter, even without the sexy times. Though I'm still hoping for more of those, of course ;) Out of curiosity, can you say how many chapters are left? Are we getting really close to the end? If we are, then I hope a few specific hook-ups happen before the end. I'd say which ones I'm hoping for, but I don't want to jinx it ;)

maybe she can fall over board and drown...end of story.

Please don't be deterred by these curt comments, I'm anxiously awaiting all of your installments and I am very interested in how you decide to wrap this up. This has become much more than just a quick story to get off to, the character development has seduced me as well.

Please continue!

I LIKE build-up and certainly haven't lost interest. How interesting that her father saw that Jesse was into her...but that there is no spark on her end. I think Laura sees Jesse as the logical choice. They DO have a lot in common, and he is closer in age. But there have been sparks galore with David from the beginning. Can't wait to read more!

Wow...This is the only series I've really enjoyed and yes I am team David so I hope he wins! Please put out more! I have to know now!!

I'm glad to see that you're back and updating this story again!!! I'm thrilled to see that the last two updates have been rather indicative that David will be the one to win Laura's heart. While I truly enjoy stories that are plot line driven, I can't help but think that I would feel let down if she ended up with Jesse or alone for that matter. In this case, I really want to see Laura and David work through this rough patch and find a way to be together. I hope your next chapter is posted soon!!!

I can't wait to read more, this is great, even without the sex

PLEASEEEEE!

I can't wait to see how this story ends. I catch myself frequently checking to see if there is an update. Hope to see one soon!

Not sure how this story will end but Damn I sure hope she chooses David!! Although she is a brat...ugh

WHEN?!?!?! Update!!!!!!

Sounds like she better get the net together or the gaff.

Ed