All Comments on 'Wheeling Park Ch. 08'

I don't know what just happened.

It's really doing my head trying to figure out what they are doing and how they are doing it.

Too much to go into now.

Don't worry, I'm still reading it, I'll stick it out till I figure what's going on.

I hope it takes forever to come to the end of this story.

I finally see maybe where you are going with this ,but still not completely sure.You have made me unable to decide whether i like or hate this story.Some authors on this site try to make stories as realistic as possible while others just are in it for the quick bang . Your story is definitely different.The way you are switching the boys character is getting hard to follow at times. Time will tell. Thanks

yeah its interesting because the outcome is still a mystery and i keep on readin this because i keep on forcasting what the end would be... i have dark feelin that the end would be somethin i dont like...

this bitch needs done in!!!!!!!

I have become soooo wrapped up in this story !! Right now, I hate them all !!! LOL. I am trying to see this from a young mans point of view though. The confusion... the sex... the confusion... etc... and I don't think that it would be as easy as just "getting away" from someone like Olivia. He has his sister and Mother to think of and then there is the sex. At that age I think sex might actually out weigh alot of things... ALOT of things : )

i'm sorry but i give up on this story. it looked promising at first but it was taken in a completely fucked up direction

Kill that cunt, slowly.

Love them and can't stop reading more about them.