All Comments on 'When Jimmy Came to Town'

Skillfully written. Terse, and intensely erotic. Thank you.

Well Nicegirlreally, this is one of the best stories I have ever read on this site. Let me tell you that there is not much more one can do with a story like this. You've done yourself proud and you should be. This is the type of story that I love to read and let's you use your imagination to picture yourself in it. Please keep writing like this, it was wonderful!

Thoughtful plot development fails in several respects. -Readers are left hoping Jimmy believes in mutual masturbation, as peliminary attractions move to non-fictional circumstances, allowing 'nicegirl' to exhibit their personal capacity for adventurous sex. Difficult to understand reason, not to remove underwear, before initial erotic demonstration! No hints given as to purpose, of allowing a dedicated fetish on Jimmy's part to consume reader interest, in a potential extramarital relationship?

Really liked it. It generated a lot of cum -- that's the point, isn't it?

Very erotic story...good build up for next expectations!

Discgolfer

Don't forget to add the sequel!

The story was well put together; enjoyed the plot and climax. I can't wait to read the sequel.