All Comments on 'When Love Comes To Town'

That was so good! One of the best short stories - or any other length! - I've read on this excellent site.

I wasn't sure about the way they met - but the last lines make everything clear... and right.

This is quality. Thank you, so much.

It does seem odd that after a day of researching and likely tasting wine, that this lady would covet a Scotch and 7-up.

I just read this again - and it's still so good!

As to the whisky and 7Up - she probably needed something strong, after a day of wine-tasting!

More, please.

Well Janie, another gem of a story just long enough to fully exploit your clever plot idea. It is very difficult to find fault in this fine tale so I won’t! Pete.

Ahhhh, good ending. You got me with that one.

Wonderfully erotic and very well written.

Last line made a lot of difference to the story. Why can’t I write such stories?

Roopmati, India

Even more so than the wines she'd been tasting.

Causes a mellow glow and high spirits...

THIS STORY WAS A TURN AROUND. ENDING WITH AN UNEXPECTED

ENDING BUT VERY WELL DONE

Halfway through the story I thought you were going the easy route that so many others take, but you didn't let your fans down. Short, sweet and a happy ending