All Comments on 'When Plans Change Ch. 02'

Not the right person, huh? Sounds to me like she is. :) I love the conversational tone you're using, almost like you're talking to your reader. I like it, although if you'll allow me one constructive criticism? You start out in present tense, and end in past tense. But great story! ~ L

please let he break off with her boyfriend before they get together. lets not make her a cheater.

Run, Jae. This girl is an emotional pit.