All Comments on 'When Worlds Collide Ch. 04'

I've been waiting and it was worth it. Getting to know the characters better, but not sure where the 1960s flashback is going.

... as always.

Five.

I hope this is not the end love the story and they way you have it set up with the flashbacks interesting.

update darn it!

seriously, this story is too good to not finish.

You're good. And I mean that. You've got some talent there. Stick with it. Can't wait to read more from you. So excited to find another promising writer.

This is so damn good, please don't leave us hanging.

Hot damn!!!! Baby this thing is a good stew in a crockpot....slow cooking and delicious. You are working

some serious juju....can't wait to get to the next chapter.

...not fully disclosing the history leaves my mind with questions while I read. Her not seeing him for a week and dodging him confuses me too. When she opens up, it was great, but something's not quite adding up and at least enough of their history to explain more of the needed interconnections were needed.

IT COULD HAVE BEEN PLENTY BETTER!