All Comments on 'While Steven's Asleep...'

But I like it better knowing Steven's awake

A great story, well written wuth a good twist at the end.

But it was a fine, well written story. Eaxily 5 star quality.

Good, good stuff.

What does she want for her birthday present? Will there be a part two? I thought the one girl was gonna try to hook up with him again. You have possibilities if you want to coniinue this story.

I did leave openings for sequels. We'll have to see what happens.

LOL...bill

Would love to see a follow up of innocent sheepish Brit seducing Steven into cheating in an adorable awkward fashion.

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Loved it! Great concept, though a little more detail to the sex and sensations would have been nice :) good job either way.

I like stories where the wife or girlfriend shares her guy. But usually do not care for stories where the husband or boyfriend share his gal (I don't have to have a reason for my inconsistency. I am what I am). This one had the twist of sharing with 3 women on one occasion -- but not more than one at the same time.

The whole idea of convincing the roommates he was asleep and drunk was clever. Convinced me, too. So, surprise at the end.

Now, write the same (or similar) from the guy's perspective, as he describes acting asleep and what he feels.

Paul in Oklahoma

Been so long since I enjoyed this story

that I would not have known that I had previously read it

had I not left my comment.

So it was like reading a brand-new story

...and it fooled me again.

And I loved it again.

Paul in Oklahoma

❤❤🔥🔥🔥

Very nice story. Love all the slutty friends lol