All Comments on 'While the Apartment Awakens'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
too much info

"touched with the first dots of mildew"

Yuck!

SpurtulatorSpurtulatorover 16 years ago
Short and fun

Fun story of a little morning masturbation. The ending was funny with her friend's hairbrush. Overall, I liked it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Stunning!

Your writing style is truly excellent, your descriptions so beautifully well-endowed... ;) You have a wonderful talent, and I should love to read more of your work, whether it is erotica or some other literary masterpiece. You truly have a gift that should never be squandered.

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