All Comments on 'Whirlwind'

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An excellent beginning. Please continue.

Paper spontaneously combusts at 451 degrees farenheit so you must never put this story in traditional form for fear of burning entire cities to the ground. HOT HOT HOT!

In its present form, this is really more something that belongs in Erotic Couplings: there will have to be a sequel to this to justify the romance tag.

As has already been voiced, there MUST be a sequel.

WONDERFUL work. Thanks much

just another fuck story. it just takes a couple of minutes. how in the fuck does ANYONE see a Romance here????????????

This is a fine romance story, but character development would have made it even better. The writing over all is good, and the love scenes nicely balance the plot.

Best story which explores how powerful an intense attraction can be.

Much more dialogue between the characters as well as what they're thinking.

Clarity on why they find each other attractive. I had no idea why Justin was attractive to Terri in this story...

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