All Comments on 'Who Needs Friends'

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Ronnie 1946Ronnie 1946about 20 years ago
Imagination Plus!

Brilliant imagination.

You've managed to cover all erotic issues ie; restaint, bondage, double penetration, shaved pussies, big cocks, anal, piercing, lesbianism etc. Very well done! I particularly loved the mechanicals and vapours.

Keep up this excellent imagination but watch for typos and grammar.

Look forward to reading more from you.

Ronnie.

GentleONEGentleONEabout 20 years ago
exciting

The story was one of the best i've read. Very exciting!!! Interesting use of flashbacks between two stories.

BunnymasterBunnymaster9 months ago

Your stories are all well written (but need some light editing (typos, misnomers)).

It’s a shame you haven’t written anything new.

Once again very well done!

Bunnymaster

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