by gaskin
Brilliant imagination.
You've managed to cover all erotic issues ie; restaint, bondage, double penetration, shaved pussies, big cocks, anal, piercing, lesbianism etc. Very well done! I particularly loved the mechanicals and vapours.
Keep up this excellent imagination but watch for typos and grammar.
Look forward to reading more from you.
Ronnie.
The story was one of the best i've read. Very exciting!!! Interesting use of flashbacks between two stories.
Your stories are all well written (but need some light editing (typos, misnomers)).
It’s a shame you haven’t written anything new.
Once again very well done!
Bunnymaster