All Comments on 'Who's The Boss? Ch. 01'

A wonderfully tingling read from beginning to end!

Please decide whether you wish to use 'cum' or 'come'. Why is the blackmail angle not even tagged?

She could even say the words out loud “I want you to fuck me” and it’s still not consent because he’s fucking blackmailing her full on sleaze-bag raping his victim.

The ONLY way to discover if she willingly gives consent would be if she says “I don’t care if you tell I just want you to fuck me” so until or unless she does he’s a bottom feeding rapist.

I think I got what you were aiming for - a consensual affair between them with her as his sub - but that’s how it reads.

Tess (UK)

I was thinking the same thing as the other most. Need to have her consistent without the blackmail.