All Comments on 'Why Stop at Cancun Ch. 03'

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peggytwittypeggytwittyover 18 years ago
WOW HOT!

Hot erotic romance with first time adventure and breathtaking excitement.

So far you have kept them totally aroused and on the brink of self-orgasm. The thrills they feel are so well felt by the readers. Their love for each other is so apparent as they grasp for each other so often to anchor their faithfulness as they enjoy this fantastic rush of exhibitionism and voyeurism. This is true love between two people who are scared and enthralled with their own daring. Experiencing this with the safety of the one you love can be a memory of a lifetime.

You write so well and this is very erotic.

Thank you for the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
So Far It Has Been Hot // Erotic but

by her words to him it is likely about to get non-erotic for a married couple in love with each other without any prior intention or discussion to fuck others.

So writer how will this go non-infidelity, balanced sharing or sick watching??? Marital respect or non!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Going Going Gone

Is this story going anywhere?

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