All Comments on 'Wife'

I hope she knows she's lucky girl. Most men don't get that we need to HEAR it as well as feel it. I think you've got it.

You switch from third to second person and back.

I appreciate comments that are made about my contributions, especially ones expressing enjoyment. I read and leave all comments posted. Most readers can determine for themselves whether praise or criticism is warranted.

The comment about changing of Person, from second to third, being annoying is interesting since the piece was written in the First Person perspective. I admit the construction is somewhat awkward, but I wanted to portray what the other individual who commented perceived and understood; my wife, and I think many women, wants to hear what I am thinking, doing and experiencing.

I may give a try at re-writing this one. Still thinking about it.

Respectfully

jouahn