All Comments on 'Wife Gets Caught'

Gary is unbelievable.

His wife is a cheat.

Maybe they deserve each other.

Near the top of any worst of all time story discussions. I can be tough on writing that has zero plausibility. Where characters say and do things that just make no sense. It makes me wonder how many people sit down and write something like this particular piece of trash and say, well I’m going to do the opposite of everything that seems logical because it will be unconventional and more interesting which does not work that way. The other possibility is that some of the writers really don’t have a clue or common sense. Not a drop. That’s the scary possible explanation. Apparently this writer thinks a monster who rapes is very sexy! Yeah, no.its just fucked up like I’m guessing many of your ideas are. It’s kind of difficult to disgust me when reading stories here. A story can be bad or the writer inept but there aren’t too many that check off every single box for terrible beyond words. I showed the story to my husband and he said is this a joke or did this writer just purposely put every bad idea you could think of in one sad little attempt to write a story? If this is an example of a puss oozing abscess kind of a story you plan on writing I’d brace yourself for some real honest to God vitriol. What I just said will be one of the nicer comments.

the story started well but turned to shit from the middle till the end

the husband is a wimp, he watched his wife being fucked and raped and did not do anything at all

any ma should immediately put a stop to all of this and kick her lover and her out immediately

the wife is a lier and cheater, she keeps telling her husband that her night of sex with her lover was not important and she did it only to honor her promise, so what about her vows when she got married, why she did not honor them,

she dressed for her lover

she seduced her lover with her sexy voice (come fuck me voice)

he deep throat her lover, swallows, and shows that she loves every drop

she allowed him to rape her ass ( she could push him away if she wanted that )

and for the husband

any real man should beat the lover and kick him out of the house

he was very gentle with them and even after they left he told his wife that he felt sad because he was hard on the lover??? what kind of wimp this man is

he did not kick his wife out

he did not do a DNA test to be sure that he is the father (her words mean nothing, she is a lier and a cheater and can not be treated)

the story is illogic

Very disappointing from an author I previously enjoyed.

The rape was too much. To make it worse, with video evidence, it was was not reported to the police.

Essentially they were turning a raping monster loose to severely damage other women.

The author should remove this disgusting story from the internet.

Not a Member For A Reason !

This story is a prime exhibit!

How can a man sit down with his wife and two so called friends, have this inane conversation and then go on with his marriage...Like pass me the salt. Construction was poor. Reaction was lame and the husband was pathetic. nothing redeeming here.

Read for 2nd time. That she did it because she gave her word was ridiculous, what about giving her word to her husband on her wedding day. Ditch her and a dna check on the baby for sure.

Said before but bears repeating:any and all promises of this kind become null and void upon saying your marriage vows.Why this viewpoint wasnt presented in this story is puzzling,and,ultimately,undermines the premise.In spite of being well written it simply lacks the payoff a cheating wife story should give the reader.

Terrible, unreal, totally unbelievable, infantile story. Had to be written by a woman or a fag.

Who the hell would feel honor bound to a 6-yr-old promised fuck especially when married to another? That is pure insanity and complete horseshit! FO with that crap.

Anyone like that not only deserves divorce but really deserves to be terminated.

Great story although it seems unfair that the swingers basically got away with pushing May into something that never should have occurred. However Life is not always a straight follower of the rules so it does happen. It's a good thing that hubby & wife found their way back to the love they had beforehand & triumphed in the end.

Very disappointing. Surprised that May got away with screwing Ralph. Surprised that there was no divorce. Surprised that there was no punishment for both Ralph and Crystal. Should have taken a baseball bat to Ralph while he was screwing May. Can’t believe he accepted May’s explanation of the IOU. Should have taken a bat to May for that stupid explanation. No self respecting husband would have watched them having sex like it was a movie. Why didn’t he get popcorn while he was watching?

Fantasy as always. Was not a good read or well written. Something is missing. Gary should get the DNA of the child checked. Also the STDs.

Unfinished business. Take Ralph to court for rape!

Painful to read followed by conclusion that insulted any sane reader.

I can see why this story has a lower rating than some of the author's other stories. Some parts of it were good and some parts were pure rubbish. I can't imagine remaining friends with Crystal and Ralph after the crap they pulled, especially Ralph. He needed to get his ass whipped and kicked in the nuts a couple of times. Seems like Gary was a considerate Chuck by not divorcing his pregnant wife, but how could he ever trust her again. He just took it on the chin but there would always be that nagging doubt in the back of his mind.

May still is a cheater and Gary should have beat Ralph's behind. He raped May's ass and her husband did another, Coward!

Two stars for a read that was painful, even with wholesale skimming. I was tempted to go one star, but for some reason settled in two. Dislike the story.) Basically, a wasted half hour, even with the skimming.

JPB

Dumb dumb dumb. Sorry just too damned dumb.

Yep! Come on over that drunken contract we wrote 6 years ago supersedes my marriage vows and I am loyal and keeping my word just NOT to my husband… duh!

Holy fucking Christ this is the worst. What a ridiculous reason for cheating. Absolutely incomprehensible. Then she can’t keep her story straight. And the comment about “past her cervix”??? Of a pregnant woman??? Dude, you’re better than this.

So many inconsistencies in this story. She tells her husband she was looking forward to the event. She tells her husband that she decided to enjoy the whole thing. She tells her husband that she wanted to give Ralph a good time. The video shows her deep throating his cock and swallowing his load then him telling it was the best lost ever. It shows her enjoying the oral sex. Etc. And in the meeting with Crystal and Ralph she admits to doing things for Ralph that she had never done for her husband. Then in the same meeting she claims to have only been going through the motions and did not enjoy it. She claims the anal sex was rape but the video shows her fucking her ass on his cock. Seems like two different stories. Which did you mean ?

An oldie but baddie. What husband sits there doing nothing for 3 hours while his wife gets fucked in every hole by some guy who is allegedly one of his best friends? And then nothing with the wife other than a few very mild recriminations and immediately all is well? 1*

What a despicable story. May is a cheating slut and her husband is a willing cuck. The kid's probably not his.

she's a cheating bitch. I wonder whose kid she is having ...

Quite an old story (VCRs?) lots of cliches, no unexpected plot twist and cardboard cut-out characters. Quite a lot of 'beyond belief' required to get through it all. Well written though

Great story - very well written and erotic. Have to suspend belief several times but we’ll setup and good flow

I actually hate this story, like no one is at fault or should be punished. In real life, it would live to regret taking her back until the day he didn’t. Honestly, I cannot imagine myself ever getting over this and forgiving her. Ever.

Better than I expected, he's more man than me though, I would have kicked them all out.....whatever debt she was honoring, broke the vows she made to her husband. Sure she hated the encounter, regretted it after, but what if the other guy had lived up to his reputation? She has spent all that time since before she was married wanting this guy for a go and she took it!!! Like I said strong man for taking her right back.

She still cheated.

I have given up on "Loving Wives"

It used to be a fun place where FICTIONAL (that means NOT TRUE) stories about fantasy sex was written about.

It has become a bunch of stories where instead of fun sex, marriages are ruined and people are injured.

Again, IT IS FANTASY

You people need to get over yourselves.

Trama y premisa de mierda.

No es para mí...

this is complete bullshit, the husband is a wimp, no husband in the world continues watching his wife getting fucked and acting as if nothing happened then he says that they were hard on Ralf??? what a wimp

he should have kicked his ass and thrown him out, and his wife is a cheater, she risked the life of her baby, so what would happen if she got STD, then she should abort the baby, so what kind of mother she is

this husband is a wimp and she has full right to cheat on him

The husband was a cuckold wimp. The wife used that promissory note as an excuse to cheat on her husband, doing special things for her lover that she didn't do for her husband.

I never understand these stories where the husband sees what's going on and doesn't immediately take some sort of action. Then to even consider reconnecting with his "best friend" sometime in the future is unbelievable. Also the wife's story is nonsense. I think she should have lost the baby and be divorced by her husband.

a story of dumb slut wife and stupid husband with no brain attached

Quelle merde, je regrette d'avoir lu cela. Mauviette.

interesting but only a stupid woman would do what she did. She could have fucked him on her super safe day's way back in college. Randy still needs an anonymous "mugging" some night. Crystal too.

Sorry, I don’t get the point and I don’t usually miss much.

So, this brain dead cunt thinks she owes this asshole a free night of fucking for some bullshit note she wrote in college at a drunken party. HUH. I think hubby needs to give her some walking papers. He should have pulled out the Louisville slugger and worked Ralph over very thoroughly, especially between the legs.

"""""“Honey, I… well I guess we’ve kind of come down hard on Ralph. Not that he doesn’t deserve it. And pretty much tossed out their ridiculous key club, but there is another aspect here that I hate to mention. But think I have to.}}}}}} " Honey I GUESS??? Who in their right mind would even begin to consider that?? He sure started to sound like a CUCKOLD there. Still a 5* for the effort.

Every negative comment xtimes TWO.

If I had ever written this drivel, I would retract it immediately and burn all traces of it (like a bad video tape).

Or I would simply kill myself from embarrassment, shame and humiliation.

Or do both. Requiem pace.

What a fucked up shit story, sorry he did not BTB (her) and cut the bull to piesces.

jopstorm1945

Unbelievable negative comments on a Must Read Story.

How can people so misinterpret suck a clever story?

The story's based on a stupid-assed promise that's kept as serious even though his wife was drunk. The other couple agreed that she should live with the promise, but the wife wouldn't tell her husband as he wouldn't understand. No shit!! But he never asked about the promise she made marrying him, which should superscede any other promise made. Never asked why she didn't refuse the promise or ask her WHY she felt she had to honor it. For her to be with her husband as tho nothing happened at all is ludicrous. 2 stars Bob

3 stars and that was generous. I would have divorced her, Honoring a stupid drunken promise after marriage is a no no, she could do what she wants as a single person and could try to escape the being caught & guilt of doing it while engaged. If i were young and not married, might have tried to go on,. but after several yrs of marriage, after the plotting and planning SHE put into honoring(as if this twat has any idea of what honor is about) this college promise, is beyong forgiveness much less forgetting. That she took special lingerie to wear, that she was excited and looking forward to "making love" w/ a better endowed male and that the male was supposedly a fried of hubby, she couldnt have fucked her marriage any worse, i dont think. Hard to beleive shes a college grajuate, but w/ all the scum, snowflakes and safe space needing illiberal grads coming from hier edumacation indoctrination centers, it actually makes sense. The idiots coming from hier ed since sometime in the 90s have had the moral, ethical, critical thinking and ability to argue both sides of an issue have been dumbed out of them w/ prolly no resistance, since they come to hier ed w/ almost no education or intelligence training from hi scrool. She can spell honor but has no idea of what it means, she'd have a brain meltdown or it would vapor lock if you asked her what was more honorable; keeping a drunken promise to a college stud, while betraying your hubby's trust or honoring the marriage vows you made to your husband in front of a church crowd? Shallow and stupid barely describe her and her character qualities are nonexistant; 1- cheats, 2- w/ hubbys friend, 3- wants it, 4-plans for it to be special, this cheating, by using rarely seen lingerie, setting up a clean location, 5- cleaning said location of all evidence b4 lover is out de do' (wonder what lie she wld have come up w/ to excuse 1- never wearing that set of lingerie again or 2- explaining how the panties were ruined, if she were stupid enuf to keep the top). I'd regret divorcing her but if shes that stupid, feckless and faithless, i'd not want to waste more time on her. As i said if not married keep the slut as a FwB but make her ask why no marriage proposal ever came. Not very impressed w/ MC's reasoning or kindness or delusions about how he and the slut grew from the episode. The friends would never be friends again, especially after i put an ambush hurting on the smirky stud( i have a lot of anger and hate issues that wld have made the hurting baaaad). rk

This concept of having to keep a promise made while single ranks right up there with some of the ridiculous blackmail stories we read on this site.

Last I checked the promises made while taking your wedding vows supercede and promises made while single.

Even though he made her realize how ridiculous she sounded when she was attempting to explain it's a bit inconceivable that he didn't just completely slam the door on her explanation.

Regardless of the pain Ralph caused her or the fact that some of the things he did were truly non consensual .... The fact is she entered into the whole situation voluntarily and then his it from her husband. There's no way things are better than ever a week later.

Are there any NON CUCK writers at LITEROTICA? R.H.

Whata load of bullocks...as for thst "koke contract he and the wife made up ..all it was was a thinly veiled " I still remember and will never forget!".

Brother why are you like this?, Don't you feel any shame?

If sex with Ralph was so disgusting and painful for May, then why were there those passionate and tender kisses at the door before he left?

Quit writing cuckold garbage, and all you idiot writers singing the praise of the lifestyle just some hard facts, swinging destroys 80% of the marriages of people who try it. That's right 4 out of 5 marriages do NOT survive sharing, swinging or swapping!

She felt she had to live up to the deal. What a crock!

Femdom agitprop. What a cuck!

May should have been mad that Gary watched the whole episode and didn't try to stop it. Typical cuck reaction to watch and get aroused.

May's explanation of why she didn't renege on the agreement didn't hold water. She didn't want to. She only regretted if after she found she didn't enjoy it as much as her delusional thinking led her to believe she would.

Why didn't Gary tell May the rumors he heard about Ralph and Crystal being part of the key club? He apparently knew a lot about it.

Wife screws another man it's divorce time

Buster2u. One of the greatest comments I have ever read. You give hope! :)

The author did an excellent job.

The story is a free gift of the author to the reader. To quote the site: "The best way to support the authors on this site is to let them know what you think of their work, or just tell them hello and let them know you are a reader. "

It is so sad that some of the best writers have left the site because of the unthankful, selfish cruelty of many commentators.

If your cock gets hard while watching your wife cheat on you then you probably don’t deserve to be part of the human race. Please do the rest of us a favor and check out.

It takes a real walking and talking vagina to write this cuckold trash. It takes an even bigger loser to enjoy reading it.

Well I’m sure all the cuckolds reading this one star garbage got all excited. You fuckers who enjoy licking cum out of your wives pussies are the sickest bunch of perverts on earth.

Mr. TB, you have written a Great Story. Just look at almost 500 responses! That makes it a winner! Great Writing and Great Story! A lot of the commentators on here must not have ever been married or ever had a relationship that involved any kind of commitment. I understand many that say things like using a ball bat on a hubby's friend. LOL, Obviously these guys haven't ever written a story on Lit EVER. My first instinct is Violence also, I certainly have a long history of Extreme Violence myself. But that isn't what Literotica is about. This site is about facing your sexuality and using your imagination to enjoy your physical relationships. I'm the first one to admit that Ralph would have lost his Nuts hurting MY wife. But that isn't the goal at Literotica. The goal here is to use your head and enjoy your life together. Accepting that your wife is a slut cheating whore, accepting that she is just a whore and is going to always be fucking around with other men and realizing that there is very little chance she is actually carrying your child in her womb. enjoying your life together. Heck, if you stop to think about it, it is probably Ralph's child! Funny how as soon as the system is set up it catches her screwing someone. Probably she has been screwing around the whole time and just finally got caught!! Obviously NEVER to ever be able to trust her EVER again. Hubby needs to understand that he is surrounded by sluts and whores and just needs to enjoy it for himself while he continues to seek a loyal wife somewhere else because he isn't going to find anyone ha can trust in his circle at the moment. When your best friend seduces your wife he needs to loose his balls at the very least. LOL, 5 stars to a writer, Great Story, Great writing, I love a happy ending. Good job Thanks

Stupid .... It was clear his wife wanted to have sex with Ralph ... As she said, she wanted to "make love" with Ralph... he is a wimp to stay with her ...

transfering being a puss bag in life into shit stories... damn thing deserves a -1000

Sorry but this is so far from what a normal person would do. He ends up almost apologising to her. Then he might start seeing his best friend again in a few months? He was betrayed and humiliated by his wife and their two best friends. How could he remain so calm? Maybe his friend will compare notes? OK it was well written and thanks for that but it was just not believable.

"But you are worth more to me than life." But less, it seems, than a stupid, juvenile, drunken promise made years earlier before she was married. I've come across this plot device before and it simply doesn't work. Anyone who would place their priorities in the order that May does is not mentally competent to get married in the first place.

The tried and true. Cuck shit

Stupid,ralph should have gotten his ass kicked,

Ok, overall, I liked but I found he was almost too calm. The wife feeling, she 'had' to honor a drunken promise made years before, dressing up for him. The seduction by both his and his wife's best friends, there needed to be more fallout from that kind of betrayal.

There was very little real emotion, especially when dealing with such betrayal. Very inconsistent and very weak response from the husband.

Look at the sub-human cucks defending each other in the comments.

Typical that they'd congregate here

eeeewwwwwwwww!!!!

What a disgusting cuck!!!!!

Enjoyed the story the Troubador...a story is a story, we read them for entertainment, you do a good job. I’ve read comments here, I don’t agree with Gary, I’d have packed May to the curb, but the story was good. I don’t enjoy a story just because the outcome is what I’d have done. Thanks again the Troubador!

The stupid non-human trolls are weighing in with the "cuck/whore" shit. Ignore them

I'm forced to conclude that either the vast majority of the authors here have never met a normal man, or they are are bunch of weak, needy cunts writing stories about weak, needy cunts to make them feel better about themselves. Any normal man would have put "Ralph's" head through the sheetrock before he touched "May". May would have been sent back to her parents as a defective product.

This guy is the sorriest fucking cuck on this site and that's saying something. The story was ridiculous. It was nauseating. May more than willingly and looked forward to the affair and willingly submitted to anal. She is a whore and her actions are unforgivable. Dumbass never tried to stop the sex, just willingly watched it and probably beat off to it. The only likable character was Ralph. He fucked the stupid bitch, gloated about it, left his marks on her, and walked away unharmed. What a Man! 5 stars for Ralph! 1 star for cucky for all his excuses. And 0 stars for the author for this disgusting joke of a story.

She still screwed the other dude. And she did it willfully while pregnant, nonetheless. The bitch will find an excuse to do it again. She needs to be gone.

The promissory note as a plot device is simply just too stupid and weak to structure a story around. The "reconciliation" is laughable. This story is an authorial pratfall.

Weird story. I understand the author's intention that May did not enjoy sex with Ralph and that he basically straight up raped her with anal. But how does she go from not giving oral except special occasions to the MC, yet deep throats Ralph (admittedly under duress), and then has to read Cosmo or some other magazine to give an amazing blowjob to Gary. I get the acting part and her having no orgasms but she wore the new lingerie and seemed into this whole thing though adamant after with just once. I guess the author wanted to give the couple a way back to reconcile. Still seemed too trite. The whole promissory note is ridiculous. As is the trope of corrupting stingers that are best friends. I liked May's responses but see no way they so quickly get back together. Regardless of bad sex and manipulation it is still a betrayal. The promissory note was more important than wedding vows. BS. Glad they could find a way back to each other but seemed overly simple near the end when ng Ralp and Crystal. Btw I don't disagree with thr assertion that just having a 9 inch dick is enough. I may be only just a hair shy of 8 inches but it took me a long time to become a great lover for my wife. Learning her body and what she wants and thr proper pacing and angles and foreplay. Ralph did zero foreplay, mauled her tuts and pussy, shamefully skullfucked her, briefly banged her vagina without much staying power or technique, and forcibly sodomized her against her will. He had thr size of equipment and the selfish attitude but no technique, tenderness, or caring for his partner. Not surprising he struck out. It takes skill and patience to be a good lover. Besides Gary is well above average at 7.5 inches. More length is wasted for most women's vaginas.

Not one of your better ones. The wife willingly had sex, admitted to looking forward to it and even put on the special lingerie to make it special for the AP. She even willingly started it off with a blowjob including deep throating before the guy got rough, ie before she knew what he was like but she gets excused the affair because the sex wasn't very good?

Also, if Ralph was such a rough brute during sex, would he really have such a great reputation from all the women he has slept with? Women love to gossip and give details. I can't imagine a woman who's an anal virgin taking it up there roughly and without lube and being ok with it and not losing it on the guy. A large cock unlubed would definitely cause tearing.

WHY do so many of the individuals, who write these stories pretend that following hours of sexual activity, the smell of that activity just magically evaporates? We all recognize the fact the stories are just that, stories. But pretending that the aroma of sex mysteriously dissipates immediately is pushing the envelope. Use of deodorizers at unusual times would also raise red flags.

I really enjoyed it. Yes, there was some suspension of disbelief necessary. I don't think some previous college drunken IOU would trump wedding vows, and if it did, there's more there than meets the eye. But other than that, it felt genuine. Thumbs up!

Mc forgave cheatingtoo easily and no payback on fake friends for messing with their marriage

"My cock was hard, of course, as whose wouldn’t after witnessing such hot and blatant sex." Well, mine wouldn't as would no normal spouse's who isn't into the sad practice of sharing.

The thing is, and may be I am wrong, but where did she learn her skills he he had not known them before in his marriage. Just asking because things do not add up if it was a one off.

Absolute RAAC crap. And a dishonest and dishonorable wife not worth fighting for or keeping.

Good try. Myself, if I had been the husband, I would have stalked ol Ralph and beat his balls to a pulp. I would probably have to keep the pregnant wife, but her life would change drastically, not necessarily for the better.

Mrfriendly8181, your reading comprehension sucks. She wouldn’t have sex with Ralph until he couldn’t get her pregnant. The baby was her husbands so now she could fuck him without getting pregnant. Still a really shitty story though.

Bullshit

Troubadour,

I normally enjoy reading your stories. But I have to admit I did not like this one. How could the wife, who is repaying a promise, allow herself to be abused like she was. That was certainly not in the contract. Also after the husband viewed first hand the "rape" of his wife he should have been all over that asshole!

No real husband would ever be this calm

Sorry, but not very realistic story. The husband in the story was way to calm regarding the confrontation with his wife and the other couple. She chose to cheat regardless of the justification. Honor? What about honoring your marriage vows? Also, who in their right mind would risk their marriage because of a drunken promissory note made in college? Yes the author has every right to exercise artistic license but when writing a story regarding human relationships there has to be a realistic vein or it loses credence.

A more realistic view of the storyline would be that the husband runs up the stairs when he sees that they are going to engage in sex and beats the man to within inches of his life, then deals with an unfaithful wife.

WTF? She cheats because of a lame ass promissory note and the husband just gets over it? She's pregnant with Ralph's kid and Gary's cool with raising Ralph's bastard? What a terrible story. Giving it one star is generous.

You take the title of most delusional author I have read. Where do you keep coming up with this unrealistic,unbelievable rubbish? What husband would sit through viewing his wife having sex instead of putting a stop to it immediately,before there was any. In real life either way she is out the door.Then to top it off you expect us to believe he would remain friends with the couple who set it all up. You really do not give the readers any credit for intelligence. -1 star. Do you dislike real men.?

Almost this entire story entire story gives me a migraine, just not believable. I stopped reading, albeit too late, & went near the end to see if I missed anything. I didn't. The meeting with Ralf & his wife - pure bullshit. Same with having an IOU for future sex. And after 6 years?!?! That she did things with him & wore that lingerie set her husband gave her & never wore but for Ralph speaks volumes. Total disrespect of him if nothing else. Hubby took much too long to get to the point with his wife at 1st, also at the meeting. 2 stars -- Bob

Bullshit

May called Ralph "lover" and "love". She gave him a deep throat, cum swallowing blow job - while didn't give her husband any. May wanted Ralph. No such thing as an IOU for sex.

I'm not sure why you hate men so much, if one hurt you, or broke your heart or something.

But you write such weak willed characters, always men, always trying to act intellectual but "holding back their rage so they don't hurt someone" but ways performing Olympic level mental gymnastics to excuse henious cheating.

His pregnant wife, knowingly and deliberately set a date to cheat with his friend.. from a drunken joke 6 years ago? And felt.. honor bound to cheat?

Would she not feel honor bound to follow her vows of marriage? It just doesn't make sense and oh boy does the main character get over it IMMEDIATELY.

I just don't get it, who hurt you?

May wanted and planed more out out of the sex with Ralph: lingerie, high heels, nursery/bedroom, past experiences with Ralph. She wasn't totally honest to her husband. She got away with it. More going on with May, Crystal and Ralph. Hmmmm

Poor story!!!!

I loved this. Turning lemons into lemonade. Great job.

Ed

You are a shit writer...right down to a DNA level.

Stupid story. Makes no sense but Im guessing as a mentally ill misogynist this appeals to you.

Horrible story with no redeeming value whatsoever. What husband sits and watches his wife get banged and roughed up by a "best friend?" There is absolutely no excuse for just sitting there unless he wants what is happening to continue. Since 1* means "Hate it" this is a 1* story. But truly very weird because unless Gary is a cuckold in the very worst sense of that word, why would he sit idly by and watch his wife get fucked and hurt by another man? And her excuse that "I made a promise to Ralph 6 years ago," isn't even plausible. Just a horrible hateful story.