by sexualsuspect
I love these kind of stories, and you did a great job of writing it! I am married to a hot young wife, and she is very loyal, but I fantasy about something like this happening to her out of her will, it is a hot thought. Not that I really want it to happen, but stories like these are right up my alley (crazyjahere@yahoo.com)
Very good start to a story that should do well among the best.
Don't stop here because she needs to be humiliated some.
If you know what I mean.
My kind of story, you got my attention.
Excellent story! Very well written & a real turn on. Please continue as I hope she begins to be attracted to him & starts making comparisons to her husband's shortcomings. Thanks for sharing your time & talent.
Some outdoor stuff would be great also...
Enjoyed it... and wouldn't mind a sequel.</br>
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The objectification is really what it's about, though as that gets established, all other manner of kinks and fetishes come to play (so to speak). I'd hope that the content would stay circling the wife, and not bring husband comparisons (as another commenter wanted), but that kind of content decision is really up to the writer. Who knows what the bigger picture was when he started writing.</br>
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Either way, I'd risk reading a sequel just to see where it goes. Nice job!
Jesus, that was fucking outstanding. Loved it all. Hope this will turn into a series where Adrianna fucks her way through all her husbands bosses to get him further up the corporate ladder! She deserves a lot of cock.
Your writing is very good. Initial character development and plot foundations are excellent. Too often stories introduce characters and by paragraph three, they are into triple penetration. The essential element of conveying the feelings - lust, trepidation, nervousness, enthusiasm - is outside the skill of many writers. You have provided a story, not an anatomy lesson. Even so, the visualization the reader makes is very important and you did a solid job on that as well. One can picture Adrianna and she is gorgeous. Finally, I would suggest that in the actual sexual encounter, you don't have to include every possible position and sex act. This has too many variations and is overly complex, and creates detours on the way to the climax (no pun intended). Shorten the last part by a third. But, this is a difficult genre and you did a superb job of keeping the tension high and the action in the readers mind. There are many variations of the coercion scheme where there is no violence and no serious degradation and I give you much encouragement to keep writing. You have a talent!
I DO LOVE IT! Give me MORE!!! Great storyline ... need another chapter ... more humuliation ... in her own marital bed ... more outdoors for the neighbors to witness her degradation. MMmmm so very hot. You're quite talented ... in more ways than one.
I want more! I want more! This made me so horny and I came very hard while reading it! More of the same please!
Hope you decide to add continuations to this. I would like to read more what happens in 3 weeks and more
I am married to a hot wife and I don't know if I really want this to happen to me.
Latinas need to be gangbanged as they are pure sexual creatures. So get Addriana to be gangbanged by the boss and his golf pals. Like a 20 guys marathon. Latinas need that.
This was a pretty good read. It would be nice to see more done with these characters; maybe something focusing on the husband this time (Femdom).
I would have liked to see more chapters though, at least 1 more.
I must admit i love to share my wife, did it with 5 men so far, it was never just one night stand.
The first time it was not easy! It happened spontaneously, my best friend was staying with us & my wife & him instantly hit off with each other. She never hid from me what was going on. She asked me on many occasions whether it all was OK with me.
"I don't ever wanna lose you... I love you more now than before he came..."
"Are you mad at me for kissing him on the mouth? i did it on the spur of the moment."
"Do you still love me truly, madly, deeply?"
"He will teach me this evening proper steps for Tango Argentino. Please be in the living room, i need you."
"You are absolutely right, the one at the end was Lambada... yes i noticed he got hard, of course i did, his hard on touched my ass several times... I hope you were not jealous... please don't be. I really love to dance..."
I liked Ch 2
I love everything you've written, and this one is no exception! So hot (and, btw, I disagree with the person who said the sex should not be as long or varied). It was perfect. He told her he was going to use every inch of her and that's what he did! Your descriptions and the sexual interactions between your characters made me wet. Please keep up the good work.
HE IS A PIG BUT THAT WAY SHE'LL BE ABLE TO FUCK HIM WITHOUT FEELING GUILTY
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The wife is a keeper. Yes, hos boss will be fucking her, but a girl's gotta do what a girl's gotta do. The girl's husband MUST NOT find out.
Having faith in and respect for you husband's abilities is there? Now if you weren't all just stupid you would start a network of women who's husbands had been let go by the POS and take his ass down and out by outing him to the company and the public. Of course then you'd pretty much all have to fess up to not having kept your vows, tell your husbands that you cheated 'for him', admit it to the rest of the world that you were simply doing for money and that makes you all a bunch of... Signed: BTW
Thought it was cool. I would be interested in seeing how you would write this if the roles were reversed
My preferences run toward more use of the pussy and not so much of the cock sucking. When a wife is just sucking a strange man, especially one she does not want to be involved with, she can in a way 'divorce' herself from the man and the act is she is just sucking his cock, like prostitutes prefer to do over having to fuck, but when that cock goes into her pussy, it is into HER, and she can not help but to be involved, to feel involved, to knowing that she is being owned, and by another man.
Great story. I contains all the elements of a good boss-on-employee's-wife story. Adrianna's tits were the highlight of the story. And the fact that she had an orgasm while he was fucking her ass was wonderful. My wife is a petite Latina, and she always earns my promotions for me. She actually enjoys 'having to fuck my bosses' and she always cums on their big cocks. My wife loved seeing Adrianna turned into a whore!