by fabledfaerie
I'm disappointed, this was the end? She went back to him far to easily, he left her after she was raped, hell he watched it happen and walked away, fucked around and she just takes him back like that?!
I totally get what you're saying, but in my defense, this actually happens a lot in reality. The irrational forgiveness bit. Still, I concede that it could have been drawn out a little more to allow for more in-depth solutions..however I wanted to end the story.
Fabulous story!
I truly loved it; only wish it were longer. Have you considered expanding it and trying to get it published? I think it would make a great book. I also think I would buy a copy of it, if you were to manage to get it published.
kinda shitty that the guy gets to rape her and get away like what the fuck was the point of that? that was just fucking frustrating like fuck you motherfucker...how fucking annoying was that...fucking dipshit.