by Paul44
I liked the content a lot, but the lack of punctuation, especially in the dialogue, made it hard for me to really get into the story and imagine it.
Fun plot, but they spoke like porno versions of Mary Poppins.
Mary Poppins, eh? Is that who you fancy? Surely you mean Mrs. Doubtfire, don't you?
Great story with an across-the-pond flavor. Way to go! Oh for the innocense of youth before the advent of porn mags, cable soft-porn, and the internet pic sites. Oh well, back to the DVD collection with you!