All Comments on 'Willing Prey'

I thought that this story was actually very good. Congrats on a well written story. I only actually wished that you would be able to continue with more of this story. Or at least right another werewolf story. Please.

Wonderful story, but I wish you could do a pre-logue to tell how the other female bitches came about and also how the rest of the night went with Clair and the other werewolves. :)

Great story, I also wish it had been longer or that you do a follow up.

Wow your story is awesome!!!

loved reading this!!

that was great and Awesome!!! are you going to make more!! i hope u do.

I thought it was just an erotic read. I loved the quick pace. Readers got a little bit o f backstory, eough to know the main, and then the roughness that some werewolf lately seem to be lacking.

Once again, nice job.

I love erotic Werewolf stories especially long ones. I would like to see a continuation of this one.

Chloe is such a nerd and huge pervert. :3 I wonder if I can switch from physics to get a degree in lycanthropy just like her... Great story!

Not going to lie, I got super wet and tingly reading your story. I loved your style and ability to describe sensations without overdoing it. Thanks for giving me something to think about tonight!

Serious pacing issues, and the characters are basically just undescribed blank slates.

The sex is great and the descriptions of sensations are nice. The descriptions of the half shifted wolves are very good too. However the characters lack any depth. The only motivation was base instinct and I couldn't tell if that was the intent or not. The narrator's voice was nice and consistent through out.