All Comments on 'With Strings Attached Ch. 04'

I love this story keep up the good work

It is great to see another installment! And looking forward to the next.

I can't wait for the next chapter.

Excellent chapter as usual. I love your work.

I absolutely adore your story thus far and absolutely CAN'T wait until more of it is up!

nothing can b stated... just wonderful yaar......... i like it... n like it to happen with me... dat a girl will force me to wear femenine dresses n will take control on me... nb make me her lsbn slave..........ooooo jst awesome......

Still struggling with some of your sentences. Especially those with words that shouldn't be in it. By the way not sure if your aware that you miss represented the word ORGASMIC; when talking about Alice achieving an ORGASM.

5🌟's

Great to see Alice startting down the path of pussy and tit worship. When she starts crying in this chapter but then begins to get aroused by Nicole's body I get tingles. We can see the hint of the horny lesbian slut she will soon become.

Little Alice is slowly becoming owned by the curvaceous Nicole. Soon her own

Mother won’t recognize her from the precious little virgin girl she gave

Birth to!

It's orgasm, not organism. Come on, you can't be THAT dumb.

I liked it when the organism ripped through her body