by candy_2691
Please continue though. I'm hooked and really want to see what happens to these two.
Please it can't be finished more please more please.
Please write more on this story, It is such a good one. Please don't leave it hanging.
I do hope you continue this story. It seems to just be getting started between the two of them!
Wow, that was an incredible series of stories. I read all of them and they were really good.
Wow, that was an incredible series of stories. I read all of them and they were really good.
Wow, I would love to see this idea turned into a full novel; non-erotic mind you, but still this would be wonderful as a full book series.
absolutely loved it .... was left wanting more at the end... cant wait for the next chapter .
Is it the end of the story ??? Since you wrote NEXT not THE END.....
I really liked it, I was being torn a bit on chapter 5 D:
>.< and with how MOST of the stories on here end in something like that and it pains me to read the end sometime, this one came around and made me smile in the end.
really wish I was a shifter xD sadly, being a white man there is no way i can, lol
I'm almost as appreciative of the educated character development as i am the storyline. Thanku for gaining realistic novelties appropriate to the backgrounds of the characters!
The story was very good although you kind of switched between first person and third person now and then.
OMG!!OMG!! Where can I find my own Abner? I always found Native Americans really, panty soaking hot but this is a story that I could not stop reading! Please, please, add a few more chapters!Please?
It was everything i had been looking for..yes the restlessness will come. It is a curse to ol us avid readers but for now u by the means of this story hav satisfied me..well and truly..it was everything rilli without even knowng it u hav filled a void..a gnawing urge..itch..dunno jus a out of bounds addiction and laced irritatn and never fullfilled..frustrations and u gave me a momentary relief..thak u for this beautiful piece of writing..truly lovely..
Continue writing..its a solace ton lots of our souls..atleast mine..
God bless u..
It was a decent story if not unrealistic at points. Abner goes from verbally abusing, raping her and threatening to hurt her to wanting to be with her and in love. She goes home after being raped (it's mentioned in the story that she even acknowledges it as rape) to have wet dreams and sexual fantasies about said rapist. He then wants to spend time with her after a session where he essentially forces him to blow him. Then there's the part where she is viciously raped multiple times by two dudes after Abner and it's never mentioned, acknowledged or talked about. Then after he gets her back home after the viscous raping, what does SHE want to do?! She wants to have sex, just a couple of hours after her assault. NO rape victim wants to have rough sex JUST AFTER being violently raped.
This story was crazy as hell and I didn't quite understand Jen's behavior. It went from one extreme to the next like the story line.