All Comments on 'Wolf Love Ch. 01'

While not terrible, it's rushed and feels slapped together. Not much detail other than some character discription.

Nothing too interesting here, I was not engaged by the story, and I don't care about the characters, perhaps try a little harder next time?

I would love to read more provided you get an Editor! If you had one you could of caught grammatical mistakes and also Robert did not introduce himself to his lover when Jesse introduced himself. I strongly suggest an Editor, but continue writing please!!

Boy, that escalated quickly.

@anon1 ikr lol

good story, you can go far with it. but needs more description and background.

I mean, that really got out of hand fast.