All Comments on 'Wolf's Kiss Ch. 01'

by TemptedAngel

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owairakaowairakaover 14 years ago
loving it

Hot, sooooo hot!!!!! Really enjoying your 1st submission. Please update asap. Looking forward to reading more work from you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
love it

please update soon

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
awesome!!!

can't wait for the next one.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
hottt!!!

brilliant first chapter and definitely cant wait for the next. Super writing for your first submission.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
i want more

That story is the bomb you have to write more of wolf's kiss

and please update soon.

great story

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
ITS GREAT

Great!! loved it, please don´t take long to write the next chapter, pretty please. thanks

cantfightfatecantfightfateover 14 years ago
Excellent start!

I want more, pronto! Okay, so I'm just being greedy. I will definitely wait *kind of* patiently until you get the next chapter out... but this was... amazing. As your Shayna said "Words fail me". Thanks for writing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
it is so rare to read novels like this

You are doing a really excellent job. You have a fan for life.

mdalexandermdalexanderover 14 years ago
SHIT

I am absolutely speechless.

catman71catman71over 14 years ago
GREAT

THREE WORDS: KEEP ON GOING

Born2ReignBorn2Reignover 14 years ago
sweet jesus...

that was too hottt for words!! I hope your updates aren't too far and in between

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
alright ...

there had better be more coming and soon!

IndianChocolateIndianChocolateover 14 years ago
Way too good!!!!

This is so good. I read it last night, dreamt about it, then came back and read it again today...Please post soon!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Love it!

You're good...keep writing pls.i really love thz...update soon pls.thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
loved it!

Loved it, can't wait to read more

mechmanasmechmanasover 14 years ago
cool story

loved it cant wait for more

canndcanndalmost 14 years ago
keep it coming

I like the beginning of this story. wanna get to know more about these characters. can't wait for more

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
wow

i loved how u just i cant explain it i gave it a five and what u gonna do about claire, and is there a story for bas and monica

TemptressZeeTemptressZeeover 13 years ago
I like it!!

Very sexy & appealing... excellent flow and plot~

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Dry opinion

Pure passion.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
loved it!

So glad i found it...loved the story especially the sex!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
This is good....real good!

I love this story already and I love your characters - Jake, especially. The pacing and build up of the story was great and kept me hooked.

You have a good way with words and it's good the way you have given us an understanding of the characters - I feel I know them already.

Keep up the good work. I'm off to read the other chapters now......

S.L

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
YASSSSSS!

Tempted Angel, you better do the darn thang! More please....

Nauti Nymph

THELOVELY1GLOTHELOVELY1GLOover 12 years ago
Good

thus far...Tantalizing

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Intriguing!!!!!!!

First time reading one of ur stories n it has my interest this far :)

xoxo

Aria

sluttyblakgurl87sluttyblakgurl87over 9 years ago
Loved it!!

Keep em coming!! 5 stars!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
AMAZING

U need to keep all of these going, they r way to amazing for u ever to stop

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Another unfinished story on this site. Such a shame. The writing was wonderful and interesting.

Don't bother reading unless you want to spend a few hours for the story to end abruptly.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Totally fucked - a rape story presented as consensual. I like forced sex stories as much as anyone else, but the trope that stranger rape is somehow erotic and actually consensual and desired encourages and perpetuates IRL rape culture. Happy to hear that the series didn't finish.

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