by TemptedAngel
Hot, sooooo hot!!!!! Really enjoying your 1st submission. Please update asap. Looking forward to reading more work from you.
brilliant first chapter and definitely cant wait for the next. Super writing for your first submission.
That story is the bomb you have to write more of wolf's kiss
and please update soon.
great story
Great!! loved it, please don´t take long to write the next chapter, pretty please. thanks
I want more, pronto! Okay, so I'm just being greedy. I will definitely wait *kind of* patiently until you get the next chapter out... but this was... amazing. As your Shayna said "Words fail me". Thanks for writing!
You are doing a really excellent job. You have a fan for life.
that was too hottt for words!! I hope your updates aren't too far and in between
This is so good. I read it last night, dreamt about it, then came back and read it again today...Please post soon!!!
You're good...keep writing pls.i really love thz...update soon pls.thanks!
I like the beginning of this story. wanna get to know more about these characters. can't wait for more
i loved how u just i cant explain it i gave it a five and what u gonna do about claire, and is there a story for bas and monica
I love this story already and I love your characters - Jake, especially. The pacing and build up of the story was great and kept me hooked.
You have a good way with words and it's good the way you have given us an understanding of the characters - I feel I know them already.
Keep up the good work. I'm off to read the other chapters now......
S.L
Tempted Angel, you better do the darn thang! More please....
Nauti Nymph
First time reading one of ur stories n it has my interest this far :)
xoxo
Aria
U need to keep all of these going, they r way to amazing for u ever to stop
Another unfinished story on this site. Such a shame. The writing was wonderful and interesting.
Don't bother reading unless you want to spend a few hours for the story to end abruptly.
Totally fucked - a rape story presented as consensual. I like forced sex stories as much as anyone else, but the trope that stranger rape is somehow erotic and actually consensual and desired encourages and perpetuates IRL rape culture. Happy to hear that the series didn't finish.