by lilgirlsix
Okay, I've just caught on to this series and love the characters. In general, it is well written, though I'm sort of glad that I'm catching it now that the series is finished since the characters are sort of flat in the short pieces (just an observation)...I had to finally comment and put out in the universe that I hope that Gary isn't able to turn their plans around on them...SMH cuz I'm acting like the next scene hasn't been written already. Lmbo.
The word dissension has been used so many times that it seemed repetitious to me. That's quite a bit considering I'm dyslexic and I have ADHD. Repetition is something I have masterd, like Yoda and his backward speech.
Here are a list of synonyms that can be used to convey the same meaning:
altercation, argument, bad vibes, bickering, clinker, contention, controversy, difference, disaccord, disagreement, discord, discordance, dispute, disunity, faction, factionalism, flak, friction, fuss, quarrel, scene, sour note, static, strife, trouble, variance, wrangle
I mean no offense at all. Thank you again for giving us your story. It is one of my top 3 favorites on here.
The plan seems to be coming together. Maybe they could set some aerosol bombs in the caves set to go off just after Gary and his followers return. They could fill the air in the caves with the antidote spray and return later to clean up.
looks to be very bloody, as i think the dire wolves will fight like furies, but i wonder about the girls and what surprise they are going to show
FOR ALISTAIR TO FIND JENNA
THEY ARE MY FAVOURITE COUPLE
THEY REMIND ME OF ME AND MY BOYFRIEND ^_^
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KEEP THEM COMING FAST ^_~
and one that takes advantage of male and female weres. The longer you put off the actual fight the better the odds in our favor. Most storys that continue to put off the battle drag on and on. Your story on the other hand doesn't leave that same sentiment. I like the fact that every chapter is still filled with details on the planning of the fight rather than jumping into it. Let's face it a fight w/o a plan of attack is a losing battle.
Simply waiting for more!
First read!!!
/Happy dance for another chapter.
Keep them coming. Pls keep them coming.