All Comments on 'Women's Retreat Ch. 01'

Wonderful beginning please continue

OK, nice, but what about Joan's husband. It is not just between Lisa and Joan, there is a husband and family involved in these decisions as well. Cheating is cheating! Is this the beginning of the end of a marriage, and if so how can Lisa justify destroying a marriage yet pastoring a church? Seems as if you have a lot of serious issues to address, a lot more involved then a cuddle on the bed.

two dimensional story I've ever read. Nothing about it is believable - the characters, the plot, the dialogue. Give up.

Really ought to be fleshed out - they're at a spiritual retreat and all that's said about it is two sentences about "workshops and inspirational ideas"? Seems like this would be a big deal for both, with competing feelings, looking for guidance in the retreat workshops, etc. Possibly even disapproving minor characters. Certainly thoughts about the husband.

Is that it?