All Comments on 'Wonderland Ch. 12'

It's about time Tempest lived up to her name. I can't wait to see her take charge. Good writing as always. I have to admit, I was a little lost and had to go back and reread a chapter, but that's a product of reading so many other things in between.

nice to see she's coming to terms with her role. and when is he gonna make his move!! i see no chasing or seducing yet

more!

Dragon training, oh my!

For some reason I much more prefer the Thatcher over Talon.

It is just I didn't like that even if he love her he still manipulated her, too dirty means for my taste.