All Comments on 'Won't Make It Easy Ch. 01'

by VintageVixxxen

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ladiebrowneyezladiebrowneyezalmost 9 years ago
ugh

everything started moving too fast her temper is unattractive

chocolatesistachocolatesistaover 10 years ago
hot

She does have an attitude but god damn if I had Nate. Oh la la

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Attitude overload

All that attitude was way forced & totally unnecessary. Tell the story don't strong arm it.

KittyOh48KittyOh48over 11 years ago
SEXY

Super Hot and Whet!

Alpha_MarmAlpha_Marmover 12 years ago
Nice read...glad I found it again.

Came across this in my travels and lost it. Glad to have found it again...must be the white wine and Amy Winehouse playing in the background. Very sexy and will finish all chapters this time. It was a rigtheous find.... thanks darling.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Very nice indeed!

Loved your story, intrigued to read more...next to chapters here I come! :)

VintageVixxxenVintageVixxxenabout 13 years agoAuthor
Thank you...

...so much for your kind and generous feedback. I get a thrill out of reading any and all comments. Thanks to those who have dropped me an email or suggestion; all ideas you have put forth are taken into my somewhat obsessive compulsive consideration, lol. More to come, so stay tuned!

peachmartinipeachmartiniover 13 years ago

Great start! Hurry with an update.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
one of my favorites

Don't make us wait too long...this is really good

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
WOW

Loved it

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
tomia

i think it was great i can wait for a update

honeybreehoneybreealmost 14 years ago
An excellent story...

I so can't wait until the update for this one. This story is good and one of the great interracial stories in this section because the characters are so real and believable, I must say that Amara is a girl after my own heart in a lot of ways and Nathan, is an alpha male under it all. Keep on writing and can't wait to see where this goes next!

LilMami07LilMami07almost 14 years ago
wow

very nice job! That was a excellent first chapter. I can't wait to read more. **lilmami07**

Black_heart_BuderflyBlack_heart_Buderflyalmost 14 years ago
OHH My Gosh!!! Great start!

I have been waiting for a good Inter- racial story with passion, intensity and good characters, this one certainly seems like it . This story has so much potential and I can't wait to see what you come up with. I hope this will become one of my favorites. Looking forward to updates.... please write soon

ShyOne79ShyOne79almost 14 years ago

Great work. Looking forward to the next part.

peethreepeethreealmost 14 years ago
Nice!

Really enjoyed this and hope you continue soon.

mdalexandermdalexanderalmost 14 years ago
Damn

Don't...Ever...Stop!

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