Worth It

No real explanation for their feelings. Agree with thedayafter.

I with Kookaburra 8 with this one too a degree, still I can’t wait to read more ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

The story was published 17 years ago and the author hasn't published anything under this name for 14/15 years.

I first read the story about 4 years ago and didn't comment at the time. I liked the writing and the way the story flows but the problem with it is that it just doesn't have enough background to the siblings relationship. I've scanned other comments that also say the same thing. Like many other readers I like a romantic sibling incest story. For this type of story to really work it needs more background on the siblings relationship.

As the story stands there's no real explanation as to why the siblings, seemingly, suddenly fall in love with each other. There's no background to what their feelings were for each other prior to the Thanksgiving and Christmas holidays. A sibling incest relationship doesn't happen overnight it builds over a period of time and each sibling will feel emotionally conflicted. The reader doesn't get any sense of this in the story.

While the author hints that the siblings are close it's not spelled out that they have feelings beyond the normal sibling relationship. There's no explanation of how they felt about each other prior to the holidays.

It is a well written story but fails because none of this is addressed.

Fantastic job 👏 👍 👌

I love romantic sibcest!