by Crouching_Buddha
Well and truly glad you did! :) I was afraid you'd dropped it completely. I like your interpretation of the characters,and so far they are staying true to that, which is important.
Very sexually charged chapter, indeed and kept me fascinated the whole time. I'm really looking forward to the rest of the story!! :)
I enjoyed reading this story tremendously. It's so hard to find decently written stories about the X-Men, and then I come across something like this... You do a superb job of keeping everyone in character, and the sex scenes are very well balanced... explicit, but without seeming overly crude.
Good work, and I can't wait for the next chapter to show up :)
PS: As for your portrayal of Scott... don't worry. Nobody likes Scott ^_^