All Comments on 'Xmas, First Time I Went All The Way'

Quite frankly, I didn't like this one because I've known so, so, so many women who couldn't end the story with "and I couldn't be happier." Guys like me have to help them pick up the pieces and learn to live and love again, or more accurately, to learn that love and sex are not the same thing.

For me, it was New Year's Eve. Forty-five years later, I remember him having a small dick. I have no idea where he is today.

I think all of us women have somewhat similiar memories of our first time. Good luck in the contest.

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andtheend has delivered once again! There is always the right mix of solid content and sexual tension. I loved reading "the first time" from the female perspective. Susan's character turned me on because what's not to love about a pretty, ice skating, Tomboy!

Thanks for such wonderful entertainment!

brilliant story. love the it so much. you are a real awesome writer.

in parts it brought back fond memories of what you wrote.

love it, keep them cumming. love your brilliant stories.

Particularly, you overuse the comma, for instance, the way I'm writting now, has a lot of commas. It's like, every sentence has, 3, maybe 4 commas, in them, and all the thoughts are short, so it makes it, frustrating to read.

You really, need to, sign up, for an English class. To improve writing.

1/5

... but the previous comment about the "writting" of the story being not up to standards. I'm assuming that was a joke, because if you are going to critique another person's work because of the alleged grammatical errors, at least you could avoid misspelling your first words...

I thought this story was amazing. I was caught up in it from the first word. It flowed to me from the start to the finish.

I especially like the ending. I thought for sure she was dumping Andy and I kind of felt bad for the guy, but then when they were married, Wow. That did it for me.

Great story and don't listen to the bashers. I think you're a wonderful writer.

Thank you to everyone who read, voted, and/or commented on my story.

Your voting support and feedback is much appreciated.

Sometimes we all get caught up in that single act.It is all about what you describe in your story.It is what leads up to that sometimes fateful moment and sometimes not so fateful. I liked your story.It was realistic

This was probably like a chapter out of every woman's book of life! I'm not sure if my first boyfriend will ever forgive the way I broke up with him, for the very same reasons that Susan broke up with Andy (originally).

I've always been more comfortable expressing my emotions through the written word (as I'm sure is the case for others on here). He was going off to college, a year ahead of me, and already knew he wanted to do a semester abroad. I was feeling lost and confused and smothered by him (and his pyramid schemes). We had nothing in common, other then our interest in each other. Apparently, me spouting off poetry at an inopportune time was what lured him to me. Ironic, because I was spouting off poetry randomly, to try and detract the attention of boys! *chuckles*

Anyway, I had him meet me at a local lake we enjoyed going to. He was to leave in a week's time and I think he had a feeling something was up. We walked hand in hand around the lake and then he gave me a boost up so we could sit on the lifeguard stand together and watch the geese swim. Oddly, there was no one on the beach at the time. There was a warm summer breeze that lifted my hair from my face. My fist was clenched in the pocket of my capris, curled around the letter I had written him. He wrapped his arm around my shoulder and drew me close. I pulled away and he stared at me. I shyly slipped him the piece of paper. Thinking it was a poem, he smiled. As he opened the letter I said, "Please read it now. If you have any questions, let me know." OUCH! Like a slap in the face!

I realize now how tactless it had been. But I was young and naive. I saw the panic come into his eyes and wanted to run away. But I stayed my ground and bit my lip as he read the letter. His only question, "Do you want a stick of juicy fruit gum?" He always carried nasty gum on him and for once, in a last ditch effort to win me over, he offered me real gum. Ah, memories.

I was glad that I waited until college, to take that step. My first time was memorable and not terribly awkward. It was his first time too, but we had been reading up and studying a sex guide and sharing naughty stories with each other. And you know what? I think I just realized my next Valentine's story. *LOL* Thanks for bringing the memories to the surface.

The ending was sweet! I'm glad that Susan's happy and it turns out she did make the right decision for herself, after all. Ohmy, my words have run away from me again. Sorry!

~Luna

...of another boring ass story, ha!

Typical female bullshit.

If you want men to be like women, engineer a woman with a dick.

Otherwise, "Wake Up!"

Susan

I liked the story except a little more detail please on the actual act and your feelings and sensations of the moment.

Bob

Susan as with most of your stories I enjoyed this

one. Did not see the ending coming. Just keep

writing and don't worry about the basher's.

Bill

WAY TOO LONG WITH NOTHING OF INTEREST.

-1ooo

But I'm glad you stopped posting. This was simply terrible.