by VenusButterflies
She's such a naughty slut. She should be whipped very hard when she gets to the doctors office. Maybe her boss at work will show her off as well. Sluts like her deserve to be spanked and fucked in public for all to see.
YOU ARE SO LIKE MOST AUTHORS ON THIS SITE . LKE THEM, YOU NEED SOME LESSONS ON SENTENCE CONSTRUCTION AND GRAMMAR
I've cum so hard from this series. Please write some more chapters!
1.) Don't make negative comments about sentence construction in all caps. It diminishes the legitimacy of your comment.
2.) If you find that there are errors, then contact me with some examples. Otherwise your critique will not be taken seriously and I'll only view you as a troll.
3.) That said, I will consider your comment anyway, because I do in fact care about the quality of my work, but please make sure you are not confusing grammar with style.
I am so thankful you chose to share this story. Each chapter tickles my sick brain just right. So many exciting twists in the plot. I cannot wait to hear more about this slut's sexual adventures. Hurry with more, pretty please! xoGina
hi. Just finished reading part5. I love this series, it's so erotic. Please keep both it ( and me ) coming. I can think of so many ways to expand lilas adventures. But you're doing very well all by yourself. On a slightly Different note, don't let others put your writing down. Keep up the good work 5★+