All Comments on 'You Are What You Are Ch. 05'

by MeanDickGreen

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itismerickitismerickover 12 years ago

Wow I didn't see that coming... great story, love the series

pkmapkmaover 12 years ago
Great turnabout

I wasn't looking for that! Nicely done.

LadyPartsLadyPartsover 12 years ago
Hate to duplicate a comment...

But REALLY did not see that coming at all. Great story with a weird twist. Highly erotic, entertaining and pretty well developed. Thanks!

ILienBagbyILienBagbyover 12 years ago
Mean Dick Green

You are a PHONY.....You aren't mean at all.

You have totally satisfied this reader with this story. Nice writing. Fine dialogue. GREAT concept. Very erotic, and a wonderful (and satisfying) twist at the end. Thank you for a great read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Got Me!

Like the others, I didn't see it coming at all and that's what makes it good. Well done! Is this the last chapter or are you going to continue the story with her and Jason? That would be a very interesting plot with lots of possibilities.

patilliepatillieover 10 years ago
Great job!

Usually stay in Loving Wives, but ventured out and found this series. Very good, and the ending was spectacular. Keep up the good work!

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