All Comments on 'You Only Learn Twice'

one word.....huh?

Huh¿?¿

Nicknames were swapped from the first story... And both were hard to follow and picture. I'd advise in getting an editor.

I preferred chapter one. It was a little heavy on the drama and the characters seemed a little odd, but overall a great start.

This chapter has me really confused and I think there's too much going on in 4 pages. Why didn't Anna leave as soon as she woke up in the parking lot? I would've assumed that whatever Wilbur had planned in the auditorium was worse than what she already suffered. In the last scene, what happened to Wilbur? Didn't anyone, Anna's mother, Crown's wife, Celeste's family, wonder where they were? And what about Ace? Is he a werewolf that turned Anna? If so, when? They communicated telepathically in the auditorium, but they couldn't during Wilbur's initial attack.

I feel really lost.

disgusting repugnant awful could at least of had Ace get revenge on Wilbur