All Comments on 'Young Lust Ch. 03'

Come on get back to the incest. We didn't start reading and following this story line to full on lesbian crap. Especially not with some old closet lesbian. Next thing you know, you'll have her getting screwed by her friends dad before her brother gets her. Please get back on track, the change in direction of the story leaves a lot to be desired.

This is awesome. I hope there will be a part 4!!

I find it hard to understand the negative comment. Here is an author who describes the myriad joys of sex in such vivid terms that one can almost see, smell and taste it. What the hell more do you want? This is pure, well written porn--raw, hot and stimulating like good porn should be. So enjoy it!!!!

thank you...that really made me hot and hard. Rod

Very good story! Hope there is more to come!

The only thing I have to comment on is using the right form of those words.

Many people have commented on your issues with their, they're, and there. Please find an editor to help you. PLEASE stop starting a sentence with "And," No sentence ever starts with And, or any other conjunction. Your story plots and flow are excellent. Please keep writing, just find someone to proof read/edit. Please consider editing than re-posting this story, it would flow even better. P.S. I could not log in. I was unable to enter the last two characters of the "gotcha" code.

I love it, so the grammar is a bit off at times, so what ? Use your imagination folks enjoy the ride.