by ZexWizzard
Horror - they kill him in the end.
Justice - once free he tracks them down and kills them, making sure the drugs and research burn with their bodies.
Revenge - once free he tracks them down and sells the to human traffickers, then takes the drug research and opens a penile growth clinic (with the seed money from selling them) and becomes a billionaire.
Good Idea
Poorly written
The Talking was strange, too much scientific explanation chopped up and sprinkled through trying to build suspense. It just made the whole thing un-sexy?!?
I don't know how to explain it maybe the man hating lesbian was a bad choice I'm not sure but i like the Idea but maybe some build up or maybe a clearer easier to follow explanation.
and definitely an actual ending there are so many possibilities of how this could end.
but I think it ended how it did because you wrote yourself into a corner and couldn't figure a way out.