All Comments on 'You're Ours, Handsome'

by ZexWizzard

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GoesGruntGoesGruntover 9 years ago
Missing an Ending

Horror - they kill him in the end.

Justice - once free he tracks them down and kills them, making sure the drugs and research burn with their bodies.

Revenge - once free he tracks them down and sells the to human traffickers, then takes the drug research and opens a penile growth clinic (with the seed money from selling them) and becomes a billionaire.

Fuzzy_KbearFuzzy_Kbearabout 5 years ago
Too Much... Not enough...

Good Idea

Poorly written

The Talking was strange, too much scientific explanation chopped up and sprinkled through trying to build suspense. It just made the whole thing un-sexy?!?

I don't know how to explain it maybe the man hating lesbian was a bad choice I'm not sure but i like the Idea but maybe some build up or maybe a clearer easier to follow explanation.

and definitely an actual ending there are so many possibilities of how this could end.

but I think it ended how it did because you wrote yourself into a corner and couldn't figure a way out.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

It's lose not loose.

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