by WerewolfatNight
I've read all your stuff- pretty good. But this is by far the best thing you ever submitted. You need to jump back onto the ball, dude- you havent submitted anything in a long time, and that's kind of sad
You've got some good stuff, but Ythes is your best creation by far- please go back to her!
That was incredibly hot and creative! It was like the ultimate D&D adventure. XD I liked it alot, great work.
Great story... man do u have some imagination at work! Hope to see a lot more on Ythes as well.
I liked this very much. Ythes is a great character and I hope you'll write more stories about her.
Nice work, I think. Not the stuff that makes you cheering, but definetly with potential.