by Ladytiger199
As usual a writer starts a good story and then shoves their readers under the bus by not finishing the story. I am so sick and tired of unfinished stories on this site I could scream. I gave the 1st chapter 5-STARS but only 1-STAR for the 2nd chapter as it is an unfinished Why 85-90% 0f the writers on this site even start stories if they plan on not finishing them is beyond me. Retired Army NCO
This is bitter sweet, I enjoyed the story, but it's incomplete. Based on the comments you have no plans to finish. This is too bad, it had the bones of a great read.
please please please please please please please please please write another one
Well,over 6 months since this chapter,,,is this just another unfinished posting???/DONT start something you cant finish,,,waste of readers time..
If you need an editor to continue, let me know. So far the story is great; good character development, subtle hints at the backstory and future plot, and realistic relationship development. I like it all.
absolutely awesome, so far this is one of my favorite stories,and i really love how things are developing between zoe and Azriel .... update soon please cant wait for more