All Comments on 'Zoey, Come On!'

I really liked it! I liked the way your story focused on the simple enjoyment between the Daddy and daughter. great.

That was great. Not wearing panties will drive a guy nuts!

On our way to the movies, a friend of my sister announced that she wasn't wearing any panties. That drove me out of my mind with lust. I had to fuck her, I made sure she was the last one to drop off on the way home. We wound up fucking in the car just a block from her house. Wonderful!

Boot Mom to the curb; get on with their lives w/o the Biotch!!

Mmmmmm; No Panties on a Golf Course, oh so yummy

Thx;

DKP

This is a nice story. I liked the attention to detail especially to the game of golf which I used to play. You need to quite relying on spellcheck only instead proofread then look in a dictionary any words you are unsure of such as aloud means sound you can hear while allowed means some action you let happen.

Is this the follow up to Zoey Explain this? Or is Zoey let me Explain the follow up?

would love a sequel - see where everything went - the relationship with Zoey, with his wife. Clever, sexy, well-written story. just hope you'll write 1 more here!!

There isn't any thing more that I can add. goducts1, summed it up nicely. Excellently written.

CobraDen.

The son's name is Cotton...what did they name their other kids...Wool...Silk Denim???

Retarded names for the kid. Must be a family of brothers . Cotton??? Dont wash in hot water the kid will shrink

Good story. Totally hot! Made me want to take up golf right now! Thank you!