All Comments on 'Zoey, Come On!'

Good story. Totally hot! Made me want to take up golf right now! Thank you!

Retarded names for the kid. Must be a family of brothers . Cotton??? Dont wash in hot water the kid will shrink

The son's name is Cotton...what did they name their other kids...Wool...Silk Denim???

There isn't any thing more that I can add. goducts1, summed it up nicely. Excellently written.

CobraDen.

would love a sequel - see where everything went - the relationship with Zoey, with his wife. Clever, sexy, well-written story. just hope you'll write 1 more here!!

Is this the follow up to Zoey Explain this? Or is Zoey let me Explain the follow up?

This is a nice story. I liked the attention to detail especially to the game of golf which I used to play. You need to quite relying on spellcheck only instead proofread then look in a dictionary any words you are unsure of such as aloud means sound you can hear while allowed means some action you let happen.

Boot Mom to the curb; get on with their lives w/o the Biotch!!

Mmmmmm; No Panties on a Golf Course, oh so yummy

Thx;

DKP

That was great. Not wearing panties will drive a guy nuts!

On our way to the movies, a friend of my sister announced that she wasn't wearing any panties. That drove me out of my mind with lust. I had to fuck her, I made sure she was the last one to drop off on the way home. We wound up fucking in the car just a block from her house. Wonderful!

I really liked it! I liked the way your story focused on the simple enjoyment between the Daddy and daughter. great.